What do you think….
Okay, I have to admit…I don’t have a title for this story yet…lol. Maybe you all can help me come up with one. I’m leaning towards giving you another paranormal story. This one will have vampires, werewolves and other other worldly creatures. Maybe an avatar or two…lol.
I wrote the blurb up real quick, so it might not be the best one you’ve read. But I hope you get the idea of what the story is about and will tell me if you think it’ll be interesting. If you don’t think so, I’ll see if I can come up with another story blurb for Thursday. ๐
Untitled Vampire Story:
Blurb:
Gryphonโs in trouble. Captured and tortured by humans, the ancient vampire is dying. The humans gave him enough blood to continue his torture, but not enough to heal or free himself. Heโs on the brink of death when a meal is tossed into his cell.
Nick knows all about the monsters lurking in the dark corners of the world. Unfortunately for him, itโs the humans who try to kill him. Broken and bloody, heโs thrown into a cell with a vampire. Knowing heโs dying, Nick offers his blood to the vampire, willing to sacrifice himself to save the tormented man.
Gryphon accepts Nickโs offer and the first drink of blood will bind them together through a life-changing adventure. The worlds of human and supernatural collide, catching Nick and Gryphon in the middle.
30 Responses “What do you think….”
I love the blurb TA and want the story SOON. I like both of the top two titles. The only other I can thing of is a takeoff from your blurb:
Caught in the Middle.
sandie
I am also going to vote for In the Nick of Time. Or you could combine the two if you think this might turn into a series, Unlikely Savior: In the Nick of Time. that leaves you a lot of leeway to come up with subsequent titles and makes the series identifiable.
Great blurb! I can’t wait for Thursday to see what you’ve written. As for titles, I’m for Unlikely Savior. It sounds more like you and the titles you’ve chosen so far.
^_^ Elyse
I think INOT was some movie in the late 80s or early 90s. I like Unlikely Savior.
I don’t normally like vampire stories. This just proves what an awesome writer you are. Because this sounds so great!!
Best writing – you have a lot of projects you’re working on –
Mer
Another hit. I'm for In the Nick of Time. I meant to ask you, will Juan & Yancey (HOHO) ever get a book?
Unlikely Savior makes me wonder who saves who… and umm a little more would be great.
and I agree It sounds like another hit.
This one sounds really good, as always. Thanks!!
I like In the Nick of Time AND Unlikely Savior but NoT is my first choice.
Tapping my toes, waiting for Thursday ๐
I like the two titles and can’t wait for the first installment on Thursday. Glad to hear that Ray will still get to meet Mom and Dad in one of his brother’s stories.
Mine was Scott & Scott comment – sorry should also have mentioned I like the teaser you did and I actually have all your other books! Waiting impatiently for all new ones. No suggestions for titles (I can't even think of them for my own stories!!)
Sue
I get confused when novels have similar titles (plays havoc with my filing system). In the Nick of Time was the title of a Scott&Scott novel.
Good thing I checked or I would have missed getting “darned” ROFL
Woohoo for an instalment on Thursday (whatever it might be called *g*)
It’s not Thursday yet? My TA addiction has been getting me throught the weeks for quite a while now and Gryphon and Nick sound delicious.
Sounds interesting TA, even though I’m not a big Vamp fan.
Hope you have a great day,
You did? Sorry, I thought with all the stuff you were bringing in that you were continuuing. I didn’t realize you were making it a series. I’ll have to reread the post.
Darn you Joy! heeheee
Just kidding.
WooHoo for an installment Thursday!!!
lol…there is time to post the first installement..if I had it typed in and unfortunately I don’t have the time to type it in today. So the first installment will have to be Thursday.
Hmmm…it looks like In the Nick of Time is edging Unlikely Savior in favorite title contest.
Melissa,
I ended Allergies last Thursday. I know Ray didn’t get to meet Mom and Dad, but their meeting will come in one of the brothers’ stories. Depending on which brother I write about first. ๐
Sounds like a good one! I like In the Nick of Time too. Still time to post the first installment today, right? ๐
So I have to go with the others and say it should be a go for Thursday!! I like both titles…roll the dice as long as we get the story!! LOL
Kris~
Good stuff…In the Nick of Time is perfect…
I like it. I think you should just go ahead and start with the first installment on Thursday.
Mmmmm, vampires!
I vote for: In the Nick of Time for the title. And it’s still Tuesday . . . you know, just in case you wanted to post the first installment . . . ๐
I like Unlikely Savior. ๐ This sounds like another magnificent TA Chase story.
Say isn’t this Tuesday? Where’s Allergies?
Okay, so I guess this is a go. ๐
Hmm…Unlikely Savior and In the Nick of Time are my favorites so far.
Thanks.
Vamps. I love vamps. Gimme. =D
YOu really do know how to torment a girl with new stories ey? ๐
It sounds really good. Unfortunately thinking of titles have never been my thing, though a world play on an old saying always works.
Please don’t use anything with dark, because I have about 30 books in the shelves that have the word dark in the title.
Binding Life
Ultimate Sacrifice
The Given
Take from Me
Unlikely Savior
THAT’S ALL??????? Come on TA-gimme,gimme,gimme,gimme!
This sounds like a winner.
What is it about Nick that makes humans hate him, how old is Gryphon(love the name),how were they captured, who’s the bad guys……..
Oh, yea. I guess I have to wait for the story to start. lol
Keep it comin’
Yvonne
I love it!
You can go ahead and post the 1st intsalment on Thursday *g*
Here are some title ideas if you wanted suggestions
At Death’s Door
Blood Bound
In the Nick of Time
Ummm…can you go ahead and post the first installment like…now?
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I love it and want more.
Does that answer any questions you might have?
Heehee